Gracie\'s Playground

One Night
Monday June 23rd 2014, 8:25 pm
Filed under: Grace,Sex
Photo by Rick Legal

Photo by Rick Legal

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Our bodies were drenched in sweat. He was behind me and my back was arched. I could feel his puffs of breath against my back as he tried to be as deep inside me as I pushed against him. I felt cold droplets of sweat from his hair pierce the layer of hot wet with each movement.

“Take it.”

“Take it.”

“Take it.”

Was the chant as I fisted the bed sheets.

“I’ll take it.”

“Give it to me.”

“Give me your orgasms.”

Were his responses.

Every time he pulled out, I would have aftershocks. My body would quake and twitch. The tears would well up in my eyes. I had come undone with him. He wanted to give me his desire and he fully did.

One night and that was all.

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21 Comments so far
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This is perfect. Short, simple, intense. Very well done.

Comment by Andrew 06.24.14 @ 2:08 pm

Andrew,
Thank you. I really wish I could write more but it was all I could muster.

Comment by Dark Gracie ® 06.24.14 @ 2:49 pm

We all had that ‘One night’ in our lives, but you described it for us so well. Thanks for the mindfuck, Grace. You’re amazing!

Comment by lawdy 06.24.14 @ 5:56 pm

lawdy, thank you. I’ve had quite a few. Haha. 🙂

Comment by Dark Gracie ® 06.26.14 @ 12:20 pm

This was awesome! Brings back fond memories 😉

Comment by Amy 06.27.14 @ 11:32 pm

Amy, Thank you!

Comment by Dark Gracie ® 07.29.14 @ 4:48 pm

I love your stories, the way you write is enchanting, raw and unapologetic and I love that! Do you write about others sexual experiences? Id love to have you re-illustrate a story of mine.

Comment by SweetB 06.28.14 @ 1:03 am

SweetB, Thank you. I have in a very indirect way and it was in a novel I wrote about a past novel that is not published. Not sure if I could really write about someone’s experience since I tend to add a lot of thoughts and emotions I am experiencing in my posts.

Comment by Dark Gracie ® 07.29.14 @ 4:48 pm

Again, you have gotten to the heart of the matter. Take it, I will. Bam. Fucking A.

Comment by Eva St. James 06.29.14 @ 4:47 pm

Eva St. James, Thank you so much. Sorry I am late getting back to the comments. Too much going on and I keep hoping things will slow down just a little.

Comment by Dark Gracie ® 07.29.14 @ 4:46 pm

This is awesome, I really love your stories.

Comment by Maestro Deluxe 07.06.14 @ 1:21 am

Maestro Deluxe, Thank you.

Comment by Dark Gracie ® 07.29.14 @ 4:43 pm

The raw intensity is simply delicious.

Comment by Nate 07.10.14 @ 10:16 am

Nate, Thank you.

Comment by Dark Gracie ® 07.29.14 @ 4:42 pm

I loved how rough this felt. Something short and satisfying like the moment.

Comment by Cara Thereon 08.07.14 @ 4:42 pm

Cara, Thank you very much. 🙂

Comment by Dark Gracie ® 08.11.14 @ 9:58 am

One night. Two words. You undone. Perfect.

Comment by X 01.10.15 @ 7:21 am

X, thank you.

Comment by Dark Gracie ® 04.30.15 @ 4:55 pm

I was directed hear from Marie Clare. Glad I clicked on the link That was and intense, erotic short story. Loved it.

Comment by Davina 04.14.15 @ 10:46 am

Davina,

Thank you so much for having an open mind and clicking that link on Marie Clare. 🙂 Take care.

Comment by Dark Gracie ® 04.30.15 @ 4:52 pm

Welcome, Gracie.

Comment by X 05.19.15 @ 9:54 pm


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