Gracie\'s Playground

Saturday June 30th 2007, 5:21 pm
Filed under: Deviant Dreams

WARNING: what you are about to read is more graphic then usual. you have been warned.

she was laying on the ground huffing through her wet panties that i had shoved inside of her mouth. a bright red hand print was glowing under her tears. helpless, she laid beneath me completely stripped of clothing and shaking. i lost my patience with her begging for forgiveness for coming without permission. the one rule that makes me venomous, don’t come without permission. a rather simple and easy rule to follow. however, when you tell a slut to abide by such a rule it turns into a fatal challenge. tonight she lost the battle.

“i expect you to make this up to me.” i calmly said after i counted to ten in my head after slapping her square across the face. i straddled her legs closed hovering above her to stare into her face.

she whimpered through the black lacy panties in her mouth and nodded her head up and down. her lips were trembling and the tears were staining her pretty white flesh. the red lipstick that she put on heavily had smeared and blended with the hand print, the mascara was starting to bleed and she still looked beautiful to me.

my face closed in on hers as i could feel the heat of my slap radiating from her cheek. i licked a stream of tears up to the corner of her eye. the whimpering started to taper and i place my lips near her ear.

“i want you to stop crying and pull yourself together my fuckdoll. i want you well aware of what i am about to do to you. it is about time we make this union more official. i am going to mark you my love.” i whispered into her ear with grave seduction. i could feel her cunt press upward towards my core. i gave a throaty laugh. “well, there is no objection and after this, no safe word for you to blurt out.”

i moved off of her to fetch my pretty shiny tools from the drawer in my room as i left her laying on the ground like a discarded object. when i returned she was exactly where i had left her. she hadn’t moved an inch. i wondered if fear was riddling her blood as she was mentally preparing for what i was about to do to her.

“spread your legs,” i said when i reached her feet.

her legs quickly spread for me revealing the dildo still lodged inside of her bare cunt. i sat between her open legs.

“i wonder when you became such a slut. i even wonder more at what point you decided you were going to just give in to me.” i opened the slender box and pulled my scalpel out.

she looked at me with such content and i gave her the look of love and passion. i have always wanted her and to have her was quite a prize for my patience of playing the game of cat and mouse with her.

my eyes moved back to her sopping wet cunt and her clit was still engorged. a grin formed, she wanted this and hasn’t backed down one bit. she knew if she didn’t want this she could have pulled the panties from her mouth and left me. i never restrained my sluts because i insisted on 100% obedience from them. there was essentially always a way out but that also meant the union would be dissolved.

i bent down, watched her flat stomach concave and her ribs push out. i smelled her sex and flicked her clit with my tongue. her body convulsed and her skin started to crawl with goosebumps. i tore the alcohol prep from its packaging and starred down at her hairless cunt. i focused on my new blank canvas looking for the right spot. i rubbed the cool, smelly cloth on the right side of her cunt below the pelvic bone. her body jerked at the sudden sensation as her head was propped up watching me work.

to be continued.

14 Comments so far
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This is particularly intense, gorgeously written.
All subs, of course, crave to be marked. It’s only right that you should satisfy that urge *smile*

thank you kindly DB.

oh i satisfied the urge all right. *grin*

Comment by dirtyboy 06.30.07 @ 6:14 pm

wow … let me digest for part two!

yes, make sure you digest. i wouldn’t want you to get sick in the next part.


Comment by TeacherInHeels 06.30.07 @ 11:58 pm

damned girl. I get writer’s block for a few days, take a short break, and come back to find this!!! You rock, my evil muse, you rock. go girl, mark her pretty for the knife…

my sweet S. i need to catch up on your delicious blog.
i know writer’s block can be hell. why i am thankful for my Satine. she has opened a new realm for me especially since she and i are so much alike sexually. that makes me especially happy.

Comment by silence 07.01.07 @ 12:11 am

It’s reading stuff like this that makes me know that my sex life is as vanillas can be. How can this get any more intense?

TF, i don’t judge sex lives by how “vanilla” they are. trust me i crave the vanilla at times. believe or not it is a challenge to achieve as well.

how can this get any more intense? well the story is done finished being told yet.

Comment by The Fury 07.01.07 @ 1:14 am

dang! that got my mind going.

well i am glad Hank. *smile*

Comment by Hank 07.01.07 @ 6:17 am

You are a vicious owner, but I know how you love. I sent a friend request to her, I hope you will allow me to watch.

i maybe vicious, demanding and at time cruel but i adore and love with passion.

thank you for adding her. i am sure that will make her smile.

Comment by Bad Bad Girl 07.01.07 @ 8:23 am

Desiring to be marked … yes subs do all want that don’t we. If you go to my blog read one of my first blog posts called graffiti.. *sigh* true. My D wants to have me tattooed in the same spot. I am excited at this prospect
I think I am more terrified of the knife thing.
But it is a delicious post that is for sure~! *wink*

yes, i think subs want to feel that purpose and know that they are needed.

trust is a huge part when it comes to cutting. yet, i find a deep intimacy with it.

i will have to read your post.

Comment by shibari 07.01.07 @ 11:34 pm

Blood is but a minimal sacrifice when obsession is fostered.

i don’t take blood lightly. i think when anyone gives it, it is a sacrifice.

i never lose face in that. i would be so lucky to have an individual give that to me.

Comment by Tom 07.02.07 @ 4:51 am

This is wonderful. I am looking forward to hearing more and watching how this relationship grows. Even if I am jealous. lol *wink*


oh Mina you are so cute and yet like me…always wanting more. wouldn’t dear A get jealous that you are so jealous? *wink*

you and others have a special place with me. you will always be my Mina. *smile*

Comment by Mina 07.02.07 @ 8:18 am

my sweet S. i need to catch up on your delicious blog.
i know writer’s block can be hell. why i am thankful for my Satine. she has opened a new realm for me especially since she and i are so much alike sexually. that makes me especially happy.

Good to hear you are so moved. Take your time reviewing the story, I’ve yet to post the epilogue.
Mark her well, brand her with your soul. I’d ask you carve a “S” in her to remember me by, but that would pursume too much. And she is afterall “your” playtoy.
Have wicked wicked fun with her.

OH S you are so naughty!

i really enjoyed what i caught up on this morning on your blog. i look forward to more.

Comment by silence 07.02.07 @ 12:01 pm

100% obedience is intense. To not restrain them demands so much trust and submission. Cumming…uh…I mean coming in the middle of the action is vivid too. Hot.

oh yes, great points Chris.

Comment by Chris 07.02.07 @ 4:15 pm

I suppose A might be a little jealous.. but he knows of my “erotic crush” *wink*

oh my Mina! *blush*

(you made me speechless!)

Comment by Mina 07.03.07 @ 11:19 pm

Impossible! But I guess I should feel special to render Gracie speechless. *grin*


yes you got me there sweet one.

Comment by Mina 07.04.07 @ 7:50 am

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