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death (a snippet)
Thursday January 07th 2010, 9:08 pm
Filed under: Deviant Dreams

warning: the following is a Deviant Dreams post, read at your own risk.

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i was walking to the front door. the key slid in the slot and i unlatched the lock that i fastened quite some time ago. i assumed he would have found some kind of nourishment that i had left in the house. i swung the door open and skimmed what i could see. the air was stale and yet everything still in it’s place.

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i headed towards the back of the house where my bedroom waited. i scanned the hallways, the bathroom and the other rooms for any sign of disturbance or even life.

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i entered the room and paused at the door way. i stood there quiet and still. i listened intently for a peep, a jingle, a slight movement. nothing. i started to wonder if he was even alive. did he let himself die in that dreary and dark closet in my absence?

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my hand against the cracked door of the closet. i couldn’t make out any movement within. i didn’t smell death either. i let my hand rest on the smooth fake wood. i could make out a faint sucking in of breath. the corner of my mouth twitched into a slight grin.

i pushed the door open till the light fell upon his squinting face. he looked emaciated, somewhat dirty and very uncared for. yet, the grin upon my face grew even more. i stared into his eyes and read him. i could see his happiness, his dedication, his knowing who exactly he belonged to.

i watched him rub his eyes. the collar still affixed with the shiny “V” gleaming and dangling proudly. his hands fell to his side and he almost started to move forward and stopped. i watched the battle go on in his mind as to what to do. was it forgetfulness or rebellion? it was hard to make out. he fell back on his feet and starred up at me waiting.


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Comment by Liras 01.07.10 @ 9:40 pm

this stirred up a lot of nice images for me, brought about a very nice fantasy i had after reading it last night. beautiful gracie!

Comment by puresecrets 01.08.10 @ 9:42 am

Such rich imagery…You are truely a deviant my dear Gracie, and I love it!

Comment by Mimi 01.09.10 @ 4:17 pm

Over the last few years my adventures have conjured up the memory of you, and the amazing imagery you spin, on several occasions….. your perspective, your beautiful deviant mind, your photographer’s eye, your tremendous style ….. and as before I have returned for a taste of you again …. that raw iron blood flavor of a lust that pulls at the core as you go over the edge ….

If anything, you are even more delicious now, than when I first encountered you way back then…. so authentic, unapologetic, and fuckin real!

Cheers,

Py

Comment by Pyrhonik 02.07.10 @ 9:38 pm

@Liras, yes i know you have read this before.

@puresecrets, thank you sweets.

@Mimi, thank you. i strive to be deviant.

@Py, thank you so much my dear. it’s nice to hear from you again after all these years. *smile*

Comment by Gracie 02.08.10 @ 8:12 pm

[…] WARNING: the following is a Deviant Dreams post, read at your own risk. You can read part 1 here: Death (a snippet) […]

Pingback by Death Part 2 | Gracie's Playground 07.07.11 @ 10:42 pm

Oh my dear Gracie, I have been reading you for years and your beautiful, deviant mind never ceases to thrill my beautiful, deviant mind…wink, wink.

Please don’t ever stop sharing your exquisite creations with us!

Comment by Mimi 07.08.11 @ 2:52 am

Thank you very much Mimi. I won’t stop.

Comment by Dark Gracie ® 07.11.11 @ 2:54 pm

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Pingback by Death Part 4 02.01.12 @ 6:59 am

I have ever by declared you the Cool One—as I like to give stciikng nickenames—-Monica became the “Good One” Walker is the “Bad One” I am the “Sweet One” being from Georgia and a Georgia Peach—You are the Cool One as you always have the Coolest Post. Yep I declare you the Cool one now you can decide if you want to spell it that way or maybe Kool One—I so heart you Raggedy. another great post. I hope you have a great day.

Comment by Mimmy 02.17.16 @ 8:33 pm


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